In the euphoria that has, since
Saturday, greeted the return of President Muhammadu Buhari to Nigeria,
many people could not escape committing different types of errors in
their comments. While some of the slips can be regarded as ‘normal’ in
everyday conversation, especially as people bombarded the social media
with emotional outbusts, we are going to take a close look at a few of
them. This is due to the fact that the errors we are focusing on are not
only commonly made, they are also linked to some of the topics we have
repeatedly treated in this class.
I pray that the President get/gets well on time
One
of the verb groups most difficult to handle is the one situated in the
subjunctive mood. Our experience in this class has validated this
assertion. They do not follow normal grammar rules. So, many people make
mistakes when using the verbs in this category. And they find it
difficult to adjust to corrections made concerning the group.
The
aspect of the subjunctive mood that I am referring to is the one that
insists we use the verb without an s where, under normal circumstances,
we would have done so. This occurs in statements with He suggests that,
He insists that, He recommends that, He demands that and He prays that.
She recommends that he goes tomorrow. (Wrong)
He recommends that he go tomorrow. (Correct)
They suggested that he goes there tomorrow. (Wrong)
They suggested that he go there tomorrow. (Correct)
They advised that she prays for the man. (Wrong)
They advised that she pray for the man. (Correct)
Now,
let us look at two of the comments that greeted President Muhammadu
Buhari’s return from London. While the first is an Instagram post by
Zahra, one of the President’s children, the other is from a tweet by the
Peoples Democractic Party.
From Zahra: “Welcome back home
Daddy?? Cheers? (apple juice) To the strongest man I know..
Alhamdulillah. Say a prayer for those that want to eliminate him to get
their way.. God is watching. ‘I pray that He guides us all onto the
straight path.
And from the PDP: We thank the Almighty for saving his life and pray that He grants him better health and understanding…
For
now, we will not be bothered by some of the slips in the first part of
Zahra’s post. Emphasis is on the last sentence “I pray that He guides us
all onto the straight path.” If it had been configured along the line
of normal English structures, the clause would have been okay. But
because it is in the subjunctive mood, there is a problem with prays.
The s should be thrown away. The correct thing to say or write is:
I pray that He guide us all onto the straight path.
By
now you should understand how the PDP too goofed, though it did what is
noble by joining other Nigerians to congratulate Buhari — despite being
its number one opponent. What is required in the statement taken from
their post is grant, not grants, because the expression is in the ever
stubborn subjunctive mood:
We thank the Almighty for saving his life and pray that He grants him better health and understanding … (Wrong)
We thank the Almighty for saving his life and pray that He grant him better health and understanding… (Correct)
What
this suggests is that you should go back to the lessons in which we
discussed the subjunctive mood . It is a tricky aspect of grammar; so,
constant attention to it will help.
Vocatives violated
When
you first call someone before addressing the person, all within a
sentence, you must separate the name or title of the person with a
comma. You must put a comma before you relay your message:
John I want you to go tomorrow. (Wrong)
John, I want you to go tomorrow. (Correct)
Mummy can I leave now? (Wrong)
Mummy, can I leave now? (Correct)
Now, consider this statement I picked from a post on stellademoskorkus:
Welcome Mr. President, we Nigerians love you.
and this other one from the Zahra’s post:
Welcome back home Daddy.
Because President Buhari is being directly addressed in both, a comma must separate him from the message:
Welcome Mr. President, we Nigerians love you. (Wrong)
Welcome, Mr. President. We Nigerians love you. (Correct)
Welcome back home Daddy. (Wrong)
Welcome back home, Daddy. (Correct)
Punctuation palaver
Entertainer
and activist, Charly Boy, who led the Resume or Resign group that rose
against President Buhari’s continued treatment in the UK, also shares in
the vocative fever. In a letter he wrote to Buhari after his return, he
noted:
Further to this Mr. President, one of the most pernicious
threats beleaguering us today is insecurity of lives and properties
(property).
There is the need for a comma before Mr.:
Further
to this, Mr. President, one of the most pernicious threats beleaguering
us today is insecurity of lives and properties (property)…
I
actually observed that many of the comments on Buhari’s return harbour
several punctuation errors, thus suggesting that many people are far
from being painstaking in their handling of the all-important aspect of
English grammar. I want you to watch this in your writing.
Consider these responses to the post welcoming Buhari home:
And
they are celebrating him as if he went for a tournament and came back
with a gold medal. What a Shame! Continue enriching UK with tax payers
money, don’t fix Nigeria hospitals.
Why the need for the capital s
in What a Shame? Irrelevant, indeed. Also, since the writer meant to
show possession in taxpayers money, there ought to be an apostrophe
after s — tax-payers’ money.
Consider the insult heaped on the country’s federal capital in this other response:
We
thank God. The ‘powers that be’ in abuja should allow this man sit
down on the chair God appointed for him and stop dragging things with
Eledumare.
Why on earth should you spell Abuja with a small letter at the beginning?
Lastly, let’s see the problem of tensing in this other clause taken from the Charly Boy’s letter:
When
I learned that you will be returning yesterday, I was glad because it
means you eventually listened to our cries and yearnings.
Can you
spot where the error is? When did he learn that the President would be
returning? Has the action of returning taken place or not? Why then
should the writer use will — and not would? The statement should have
been:
When I learned that you would be returning yesterday, I was
glad because it means you eventually listened to our cries and
yearnings.
In concluding, I must note that some of the errors
spotted might have been eliminated by the writers if they were not
passing the message through the Internet and the social media. The
spontaneity driving social media messaging and the emotion pushing the
words out are likely to have overwhelmed the people concerned. Yet, as I
noted when we were treating English language use on social media, you
must be extra careful when online because the platform ought not to be a
hot bed of errors.
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